This week writing task was a free-verse poem about '' my mum Hands. We practised using semi-colour a range of sentence lengths and using better vocabulary. Our poems are based on an original poem written by Gary O'Connell. I chose to write about my mums hands because she is someone very special to me
My Mum's hands
are smooth and ruff at the same time
Her back ,as straight as a stick.
Her legs , as stiff as a post.
Her , laugh as loud as sound.
Her ,voice as soft as a pillow.
Her hair ,as black as night
Living peacefully
wrapped with love
